my story got workshopped today. everything was fine. my teacher loved my main character and commended one paragraph on the beading-relationship metaphor i wrote. there was one thing missing, though. they didn't see the "love" between the main character and the love interest. sheesh... it's supposed to be a love story, for crying out loud. i think i've become too cynical.
i'm over him. i swear. but i'm afraid i've become too bitter about things and love, in general.
i'm over him. i swear. but i'm afraid i've become too bitter about things and love, in general.
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